by sueshows
Well-written! Your dialogue and action flows very well. The plot is simple and effective, a good vehicle for eroticism! Thanks for posting, Sue!
dunkirk. i searched for your published works but I missed it some how.
Grow some 'hanger downs' and publilsh something.
OR slink away,
damm that was hot, i wish i could have a girl or a mature lady pee on me, i miss it so much, thx for sharing sue xxx