All Comments on 'Out of Africa'

Yes my fate was sealed! I would soon be divorced and single and good ridance to the cheating bitch!

but make sure the rope don't wrap around your neck, TK U MLJ LV NV

Or better yet is it a rewrite? No matter, it's still 1 star.

Why hang around to be forth class person in the house you pay for.

Dump her ass and let Carol make the house payment.

Her ass was grass when she started the whole plan.

if you want a women that fucks other men don't marry them just date women that date other men. That way you save the expense of paying for her life but get the benefit of no sex and being with a slut. Barring that remember dead wives tell no lies.

One star

not worth a comment

limp wrist cuck tell

find a man to hang out with and try again. leave the pink panties at Matt's house

I love the start of this story. Please continue.

Not only can I not see a man accepting this level of shit, I can't see any woman actually doing that to a man they profess to love. I would suggest trying again; but only if involves the author saran wrapping his head until he passes out.

... but this story seemed to be a retread of dozens of other cuckold stories - the progression is exactly the same.

The best LW stories are those where the author of the comment gets his underwear in a knot because she is cheating on him before he notices that Hubby was doing it first and is doing it more often. Perhaps the moderators re-assign stories with such plots to Erotic Couplings; too bad - the outraged comments in LW are usually more fun than the stories

The husband tells his wife it's only a fantasy. She decides to become a cheating slut. Time for him to move out and divorce the whore. Not a single clever, interesting or original thing in this mess. Not a single decent character. A slut, her slut sister and a spineless man. What do you think could possibly be interesting about this garbage? Your writing certainly wasn't compelling. You populated your story with characters that act without rhyme or reason. Even for fiction, this was drivel. A "1" because negative scores aren't yet allowed.

@H.H.Morant The editors of Literotica practiced their duty only WITH MY STORIES!!!!!!! After the denunciation of a Nazi Germany Gestapo or Stalinism Soviet NKVD denunciator Frontlinecaster they moved my stories to Fetish hub!

I withdrew my stories after moving to Fetish and now I republish them on Fetish with a little change in the preface. I have just begun my 4th stories on Fetish.........

Lol, so am I a nazi or a communist, you can't seem to make up your mind. Also, you call me a Nazi Gestapo "dennuciator", so I'm someone who's against the Gestapo and denounces them? I think I can agree with you on that.

Seriously, you clearly don't speak english well enough to be trying to write in it. Give it a rest, you lost.

Another gay writer.

Worst crap ever written .

I don't think I have ever seen a score this low!

the writer must really hate men. don`t know any man that would put up

with a wife like that. really there are to many women who only want a

no strings date.

This was awful.

It always happens. People comment on the plot of the story or the characters "not being normal". As far as the writing went, it wasn't bad. Fairly descriptive, spelling and grammar good, and somewhat believable if people open their minds and realize that there are actually people out there with these needs. I may be in the minority but I liked it.

4 stars.

Pretty good technically but total bullshit story. Some will love it but most will get the idea and never return.

the word 'boomerang' is Australian. You are a pom.

In my experience, most poms are kinky, whipped, wimp faggots.

Over here in Australia, we disagree with your very thought processes. So as such, your use of an aussie term is offensive, especially the aboriginal name for a special weapon.

Why don't you give yourself a descriptive name that fits, like..er... I dunno, how about LilPinkFlacidTapeworm7 or something. That'd suit your 'weapon' a lot better.

Congrats!

Very good job. Keep the story going. Please start adding chapter numbers. Also lock cuckold in chastity. None of this nasty wanking as he waits to eat a real mans sperm out of his wife's pussy and ass. Also naughty sister needs to find a couple of top tranny's to help train hubby and teach him to suck, swallow, and take a good fuck and breeding. Hubby needs to enjoy his cuckolding. Also some text messages with photo's for cuckold to see how much fun wife is having.

Fucking Fag

Can't wait for chapter 2!

Not one story made it to 3.5 stars. Doesn't that tell you something? This guy is a cuckold/fetish writer relished by guys like devilspy and OOAA the two sickos of Cuckerotica. Don't believe me, read their comments. Both enjoy slurping fresh cream pies, straight from their wives slutty cunt. Don't you boys?

not even worth the single star I gave it

He mentioned his little brain, it has to be small to fit in the end of his 3 inch cock where all willing cuckolds have their brains. personally if my wife told me she was going out to cuckold me, "SHE WOULD BE TOAST" AND NEED NOT BOTHER COMING HOME, until she had been tested clear for STD's etc. and then she would be served the moment she arrived home.

throw both of the cunts out he doesn't need either one whores

right they both need to be thrown to the curb nothing but whoreshe needs to grow some balls

All these anon folks, need to shut up!

Being a cuckold is a need? I thought food, water, air, etc.we're needs. Being a cuckold would be a curse.

Let the cheating cunt support herself. If the stupid bitch sister tries to touch him, bitch slap her and throw her out. What's she going to do, cry? This story was beyond stupid. What husband lets his wife expose him to every nasty disease known to man? Get a divorce and let her risk her own life. She's of no concern to him.

1 star

This is a real sorry excuse of a very wimpy cuck and slutty wife story. Nothing here to see. Just short and terrible.

Bpy all I saw was a room full of human trash that isnt even worthy of breathing.

I would walk away and leave .

Divorce her. Make sure everybody knows what the women are doing and if she tries to lock you up, go to the police and have her arrested. It's easy. He controls his own fate. Dumb