All Comments on 'Out of Africa'

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Cindy1001Cindy1001about 3 years ago

A bit abrupt turn, unless this is the beginning of something more ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
The ending fell pretty flat.....

She spent the whole story fighting him, then you skip to the end with her being completely submissive, but with no detail how she ended up failing in her defiance. Good.start, poor end....

ilovetosuckonnipplesilovetosuckonnipplesabout 3 years ago

Please continue the story. Looking forward to reading more about her training and her adventures during the poker match.

jamaidajamaida7 months ago

This needs a sequel. A return of Ki Gor would be good interesting

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