All Comments on 'Overly Familiar Pt. 02 Ch. 07'

I find it amusing that people complain about to much sex scenes on a site dedicated to stories about sex XD

Hey man,

Love this particular piece of yours. No shot against you or your writing but I’ve yet to be as immersed in the more painful stories that you have written as I have this one. Marvelous writing and plot development once again. I await future chapters with relish.

Quick question, do you have any socials or other accounts that your fans could follow outside of lit? If not that’s totally fine, just wondering.

Keep doing what you’re doing; your imagination and execution are both a marvel.

Thanks,

A grateful reader

As another commenter said it’s funny people are complaining about too much sex scenes on this site but oh well

I’m glad no one is gonna change but I never thought Master sorry Matt was going to make them

I would very much love it from Alex’s POV too as I loved how twisted that story was can’t wait to see them merge

And ahhh I hate you for leaving me on cliffhangers all the time it’s very cruel

I'm always pleasantly surprised when I see a new chapter. They are well written and a pleasure to read. I really don't get it when others say there's too much sex. For me too much sex is when it's used to fill up space. If it is part of a coherent storyline, I don't see a problem. So please just keep writing the story as you always have.

Like someone else said, it is annoying that someone would complain about sex in a sex story forum. Also the real annoying thing for me personally is reading explanation's about the story from the author. Leave that to your readers, I will form my own opinion about the story if it's good bad or the reasons a character does something, that's the fun of reading your story. You write very well and I enjoy what you have written, don't over analyze it or explain (spoon feed us) anything. Either we are big girls and boys and get it or we don't.

Thank you for your writing.

Cheers.

I'm glad this will keep it's tone. I like CD as well. So it's nice to have a contrast. A Horseman who's doing good and resisting the end is aweso,awesome, too.

way to much sex. more action plz

3 stars because of the author’s notes. Write the story don’t explain yourself. Saying what won’t happen to a character ruins part of the story as you don’t put further thought into it.no doubt or worry etc.

How many growls and glares are in this story.

Try a thesaurus.