Overly Familiar Pt. 02 Ch. 09

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(A/N: Hello again, guys! As always, I thank you very much for the many kind words you give me with both your reviews and your feedback. I read it all and it is very appreciated.

Not too much to say in this one.

I did have one very interesting comment. And it was basically warning me against spoon feeding you all my justifications and reasons behind what I write and why I write it that way. And this is a very fair point. So I will now over-explain my over-explanations. And yes lol I do see that as very backwards reasoning, but I'm doing it anyway! A fourth wall break within a fourth wall break? That's like... sixteen walls!

Anyway... I love talking about my stories and the reasons why I make the choices I make. Ask anyone who I talk to on a regular basis. I will eagerly at length go on and on about my thought process of why Mara has the biggest tits of any girl in the harem. Okay so I haven't explained that but you get what I mean. I basically use your questions as an excuse sometimes. But also, I'm taking advantage of the fact that I can get fan feedback as I'm writing the story on what they get and what they don't get and so on, whereas if it were a novel, then... it'd be done already. Nothing I can do with the info short of implementing it into later books.

So... I guess I'm sorry that I overanalyze and explain things in these author's notes, but I will probably continue to do so, if I'm being honest. I will try to avoid directly spoon feeding info to you though. Worry not.

I think that's everything! So be safe! Take care! And I'll see you in the next chapter!)

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I dislike some sorts of commentary, and once I encounter what appears to be a bad-to-me commentary I skip the commentaries in the rest of the series. This series included.

bhojobhojoabout 1 year ago

whenever I hear the name Bob it reminds me of that episode of top gear when Clarkson challenged rowan atkinson to make anything sound funny and he said Bob. That is just a classic.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 1 year ago

2 because of the commentary. Let the story do your talking.

basicbrat181basicbrat181about 3 years ago

I don’t mind the explanations I actually quite like them I do however not like the cliffhangers but that’s because I wanna know more and I love this story

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