All Comments on 'Overstepping The Line Ch. 02'

by OneEyedSteve

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rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop3 months ago

Very good , keep up the good work

brianpchbrianpch3 months ago

Very good story, hopefully there will be more.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very very good.. She’s showing Steve a good time. Although he’s obviously enjoying it, he’s sinking deeper and probably becoming addicted. Hot that Amy loves anal so things are pretty intense for Steve. It’s easy to see how it all might end badly though..Just thinking about that..so hard..

JT

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawgg3 months ago

I like the multiple POVs. Steve is the hub ( for now ) but his wife and stepdaughter don't center themselves fully around what he wants. Their relationships are symbiotic but not fully committed. I enjoy that he has to stay receptive to what his ostensible harem wants.

Enjoying the nuances that run parallel to the carnal action.

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