All Comments on 'Oxygen Games Ch. 11'

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ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 2 years ago

This story has felt like a couple barreling down a road out of control. It looks like there is a corner up ahead they aren’t going to make it around. Interesting but overall a sad story. I hope you have a good ending planned for them. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Once again, the 'Rosa' character breaks the bet.

They agreed on nothing public...yet she's doing it in public.

This is a recurring theme with this couple...the story loses a lot of enjoyment when one character badgers the other into a bet and then castigates them for their forfeit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ouch what an intense chapter! It is completely heartbreaking. Very well written. The two options are nowhere near being similar. My first thought on him choosing the latex was, she seemed interested in it. It definitely wasn’t; turn her into a fuckdoll and get away from the crazy wife. This one is potentially an end of marriage scenario. Will she or won’t she?

Tess (uk)

ThorlolThorlolalmost 2 years ago

At that point I am asking myself why those two are even together anymore. From his wifes manners in this chapter I can only conclude that there is zero love left. Whats going on with Aidan I cant really say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Time for cassie to get filled and knocked up

AccelarVesterAccelarVesterabout 1 year ago

Disappointed with her bet. The beginning of the end. So sad.

oneagainstoneagainstabout 1 year agoAuthor

There is light on the horizon. Happy endings aren't given. They have to be earned. Please wait for Only Consenting Adults

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

big difference between roll playing with your wife and getting some strange. This marrage is over, that is if he has any self respect.

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