All Comments on 'Oz Beach Boy & Odessa Pool Prank'

by MyBareTorso

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MarassoMarasso8 months ago

Wow, another hot story! I'm not a big expert in the CNFM genre and I haven't read many stories with this tag but yours are crafted perfectly. You know how to capture these subtle nuances, thoughts, and emotions while someone is exposed and stripped naked publicly.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What did you think of the story?

Not much.

MyBareTorsoMyBareTorso8 months agoAuthor

Marasso & AlwaysDissingDaddies...thank you as always! I appreciate your continued support and readership, it means a lot. And to Anonymous, thank you too. Your comment really gave me a good giggle. I liked how you repeated the "What did you think of the story?" question, and then just sunk the boot in with "Not much." A great example of humour through brevity, and also a wonderful "bait and switch", by opening with the lengthy question, and then just dropping an amusingly to-the-point put-down. Very funny stuff. I hope you return with more pithy, casually brutal critiques like this one. Thanks for taking the time out of your day to read and comment on my story. You are truly wonderful. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™‹โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿคฉ

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I really appreciate how well your stories are described and tagged! Everything is clear, everyone knows what they're getting. Excellent!

Recently, I came across a story with only a lead and no tags! (title: Slow Burn) The story had 30,000 words! How can you embark on a time investment when you don't know if you might suddenly come across some strange fetishes, scat, cheating etc.?

Good job, BearTorso! ;)

VHarringtonVHarrington8 months ago

Public "forced" nudity and sex in an elevator. What's not to love? I think the ladies of the apartment complex need to discipline Matt for being so full of himself. Fun story and characters.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very enjoyable! Love when Matt is exposed to a wider range of women, both younger & older than him. Even though he was in on it, I liked that he & Odessa made it seem he was stripped against his will.

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Based in Sydney, Australia, I am a male who loves lounging on the beach and getting naked for groups of women whenever I can. Though I write across categories, ALL of my stories are CFNM-driven and feature my recurring "Oz Beach Boy" character Matt, a handsome, heavily muscled...