by MyBareTorso
Yes, it's short...please note that this story is an entry in The 2024 750-Word Project!
This juvenile preoccupation with big cocks ruined a cute vignette. Merely saying it was ‘big’ would have been enough and given the author more words to give some emotional response to her being pantsed.
You obviously haven't read my previous stories, which is fine...thanks for taking the time to have a look. But if you don't like stories that have a juvenile preoccupation with big cocks, I'd suggest you avoid my posts...my recurring main character's huge cock features in everything I've written...and everything I will write in future. 🙏
I'm kinda disappointed that Taylor's friends pantsed her instead of sharking her. After you mentioned her huge boobs bouncing, I felt them pulling her top off would've followed up on that. I do get that it was an eye-for-an-eye thing, but it still feels to me as the reader that de-topping her would've been better. This is still good as it is, of course, and my preference is purely subjective.
Entertaining as ever, and well done with such a tight word limit. Picking up on other comments I wouldn't listen to them, as a guy with a tiny penis, I love reading stories about what it is like to be properly endowed. Keep up the good work.