All Comments on 'Pam - The Thrill of Getting Caught Ch. 01'

fun twist

U should write more about that Milf who had 2 men come inside her before u did. Sounds like more fun then the main character. Solid writing, the motorbike scene very good. I have a ducati and is very hard to fuck on. The motorbike you describe is an older sitting up style with a longer seat.

Did not see that ending coming.

On pins and needles wondering how the crowd would react.

Bravo

5 stars

Captivating. The writing is great and the originality is off the charts. Story had me locked in. The author earned me looking at your other work.

Superb curve ball at the end. The story was great, did not need to add the lady in the middle there.

Alright alright, nice piece nice piece. The ending had me. Young fella bringing the rope a dope out here like that.

You're on one date but have sex with another, what a turd. The story & sex was amazing though. 5*

- Laddy you have the makings of a great series.

- The other bird in the story was a waste and daft.

- Overall I was very chuffed & turned on.

- Job well done.

Liam UK

My lover sent me this story as inspiration for our next rendezvous and I'm glad she did. The ending threw me for a loop in a good way, wink.

If I am being honest the addition of the other woman took away from the main story. Still very much enjoyed the read.