by Tiesto1
Part 3 is the best of the series so far. The twists you put in are creative and unique.
Amazing! I could see myself standing in the room watching. Great touch adding the guard is. One critique, the chapter could have been written out longer. Did you her tell her the identity of the other man?
Your story twists are fun. The direction of the series still confuses me. 4/5
- You lucky sod, got away with one there.
- Risky, you could have gotten pied off or slapped for trying it.
Liam UK