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by MsProfiterole

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DanDraperDanDraperover 1 year ago

Not bad for a first story, but I feel that it could've been expanded more for character development.

MsProfiteroleMsProfiteroleover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Dan, I appreciate that feedback. I have another story in the works, so I'll keep that in mind.

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