All Comments on 'Pandora's Box'

The story is hot (especially if it's continued, presumbly...?; ) But i wonder why you took such pains to reveal the negotiations so early on? A little Noncon suspense would have been kinda hot, before doing the big reveal *later. Just saying. Still loved it. THX

Well written. very descriptive, both of the physical and psychological aspects of "whoever" Can't wait to read after "whoever' is removed from the box