by SpacegirlLynn
Truly excellent story about real people doing exciting, believable things, albeit new ones. Great build-up and suspense as the evening progressed. Author could benefit from an editor (Bear/bare), but hot erotic writing nonetheless.
A really great story. Can't wait for the next episode.
So hot, I had to rub myself off in my girlfriends panties
Some of the worst "writing" I've ever read. Absolutely terrible.