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All Comments on 'Paradise Obtained Ch. 02: Delilah'

by clantongang

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TSreaderTSreaderalmost 3 years ago

A very yummy addition. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
great story

Excellent characters, excellent plot, wonderful writing, and a marvelous love scene, all add up to a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This needs an edit, who is Inga? Random character name changes aren't good.

clantongangclantongangover 2 years agoAuthor

Oops, sorry my bad. Should be Ilse.

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I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...