All Comments on 'Paradise Obtained Ch. 12: Tasha'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was a another good chapter, but I was expecting more of Megan's story. Bringing her into the harem. The way you did it makes it sound like she accepted the relationship.

clantongangclantongangover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Anon - I thought I had explained Megan's acceptance in Ch. 11 (i.e probably more to do with her wanting to explore her bi-curiosity about women than anything else), but I might add a bit of a Megan/Tasha discussion with Matt about how they feel about being inducted into the harem in the next chapter. It it is always amusing to highlight how much more aware the girls are compared to their intellectually clever but emotionally dim Master. I think they are slowly educating him!

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