All Comments on 'Paradise Obtained Ch. 14'

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captainyesterdaycaptainyesterdayover 2 years ago

Very nice! Even though your MC says 9 women is the limit, I like the idea of a twist ending where Georgia and the rest of the harem take his programming to the extreme and hypnotize Matt to keep adding more women to the harem. He said keep finding more women, so maybe as sequel bait or an ending he has no choice but to keep getting a bigger harem

clantongangclantongangover 2 years agoAuthor

Just to note that, despite Matt's harem being complete, there is a bit more of this story to come; I'm working on Chapter 15 at present. Thanks for the kind comments captainyesterday. In answer to your thought, fortunately for Matt his technique doesn't work on men so he is safe from being controlled. Which with Delilah around is probably just as well!

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I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...

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