by EmiTsuruta
I just loved this story. I definitely agree that" there is something kinky about [a girl] wearing just a top, but being naked from the waist on down." Emi can't help getting horny by displaying herself. The first part where she and her relatives go skinny-dipping is very believable, but the part where she goes nude in the soba shop is not. I was disappointed that Hideki didn't show a hard-on when he saw Emi nude. I like the part about the smiley girls admiring her and taking her picture. The part at the end where the video was accidentally shown was a funny touch. Also, the length of the story was just right. In summary, the author should focus on what is the most realistic scenario while keeping the story a good length.
I loved this story. The way she kept pushing the boundaries and getting just a little more exposed. Very exciting.
I'm amazed the other hikers didn't join in on the skinny dipping and cliff jumping. OTOH, that might make a good part 2 to the story.