All Comments on 'Paradise on Earth'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Have you ever told the story about flashing in the wedding ceremony Emi?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I'm amazed the other hikers didn't join in on the skinny dipping and cliff jumping. OTOH, that might make a good part 2 to the story.

KDLitKDLit9 months ago

I loved this story. The way she kept pushing the boundaries and getting just a little more exposed. Very exciting.

exhibitionistguyexhibitionistguy12 months ago

I just loved this story. I definitely agree that" there is something kinky about [a girl] wearing just a top, but being naked from the waist on down." Emi can't help getting horny by displaying herself. The first part where she and her relatives go skinny-dipping is very believable, but the part where she goes nude in the soba shop is not. I was disappointed that Hideki didn't show a hard-on when he saw Emi nude. I like the part about the smiley girls admiring her and taking her picture. The part at the end where the video was accidentally shown was a funny touch. Also, the length of the story was just right. In summary, the author should focus on what is the most realistic scenario while keeping the story a good length.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great story love the family home videos concept please write more!

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