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Click here"Told you he could really make a girl squeal," Sue said with a breathless giggle.
"Oh fuck," my wife said as she lay, still breathing hard. "You weren't shitting me."
"I aim to please," Jerry said with a grin. Then he looked up at me. "I have learned a few tricks," he chuckled.
"I guess. I don't think I've ever seen my wife do that."
"All in the fingers!" he answered with a grin. "And hey, I got to cum all over her tits again!"
"So you did," my wife said. "If you're gonna make me come like that you can come all over my tits any time you want!"
"I'll take that as an invitation," he answered.
"Come on," Sue said as she stood up and gently pushed me back with her ass. "You and I need to clean up before we do anything else."
"Anything else?" I asked.
"You don't think I'm gonna let you go home yet, do you? I mean it IS Friday night. Might as well stay till morning. I'm sure Joan won't mind sleeping with Jerry and I'm looking forward to sleeping with you."
"I didn't know we were staying," I answered.
"We don't have to," my wife said as she slid off the table. "But I wouldn't mind."
"If that's what you want," I answered.
"Good. We'll go freshen up and meet you in the family room. I'd be willing to bet Jerry can find a nice sexy movie to watch. How about it Jerry? Think you can find something interesting?"
"I bet I can. How about that one with two couples camping and swapping in the tents at night?"
"Perfect," Sue said with a grin before taking my wife by the hand and pulling her towards the house.
"God I love her tits," Jerry said as the two walked away. "You won't mind if I wank over 'em again, do you?"
I chuckled. "I don't think I'll mind that. Not as long as you clue me in on what you did to make my wife cum so hard."
"No problem. Let's go find that movie," he said as he started heading toward the house.
I followed him into the house, knowing that our fun for the night was far from over.
- COMMENTS
Houmafan6 months agoThe story was a bit meh in places but the pacing is good. I laughed out loud when I got to this:
"Well. Kinda screwed that up," he said quietly as he climbed to his feet, picking up the vibrator he'd used on my wife and the towel.
I hope the towel felt as good as the wife…
ronibarret7 months agoNever mind the negative commentary. While I also caught the mis-spelled 'pallet,' it didn't take anything away from the action. Five stars! Well done!
Anonymousover 1 year agoDamn ! I got myself another boner to deal with. The dialogue is so good, I feel like I'm with them watching and hearing everything. I see myself wanking away as both couples are going at it. Absolute entertainment and I hope you never stop writing. What else can I say ... voted you another five stars. Now heading for chapter 3 to find out what these two perverted couples are up to.
Fseriesabout 2 years agoDefinitely nope. It was all a setup from the first story so the wives could cheat on their husbands. The guys definitely need to divorce these conniving cheaters.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoSomehow I missed this as being a “Swinging” story. But the first was so good, it brought me to this one. Great story. Don’t let the probs with editing or spelling/punctuation stop you. The story runs well in it’s sequencing and story line. If I could do as well I would be writing.
Thanks.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoSo what, with 8,000 words? And then, you state, "it's not surprising that both I and the proofreader miss an occasional word."
It's more than an occasional word, it's also grammar. It's not surprising that both the proofreader and I miss an occasional word, is how it's supposed to read.
And again, the Brit habit: "the wife", "the wife", ad nauseam. Give the poor woman a name more often. Did someone teach that emphasizing, "the wife" increases erotic tension? Not to me it doesn't, it is highly annoying.
m_storyman_xalmost 5 years agoAuthorTo techreader...
Out of 8000+ words on this chapter, it's not surprising that both I and the proofreader miss an occasional word. Happens even in professionally edited and published books.
M
techreaderalmost 5 years ago"My wife has been trying to expand our pallet as she puts it."
"Pallet" is a bed, or a platform, like the ones made of wood that cargo is stored on.
"Palette" is the board that an artist uses to mix paint colors. I think this is what you were referring to.
Insigniaalmost 5 years agoWith all of the humiliation, deceit, trickeration, back stabbing, and mistrust these once nice, church going innocents will be.....
Wait....they just had mind blowing sex and want to do it again? Well how can this be? Very hot sex. Decent dialogue. Just damn good fun. All BBQs should unfold this way. Great story. I guess I missed the part where the divorce attorney showed up.
