All Comments on 'Party Play'

Really well written: explicit and erotic, with good detail

I really liked the anticipation and the articulation of the story. It was well written and I felt like I was a voyeur feeling and being a part of what was going on. I would like to see what this author could do moving forward with this couple. This was a turn on.

Love that there's just enough backstory to give us a sense of scene, but the ultimate focus is the sexual encounter.

liked the 10-year hiatus, the frank talk, him catching her off guard by his frank responses to her teasing questions... real life between them for 10 years, and the encounter in public... 5 from me

This reads like one of my favorite fantasies.

It was such a perfect turnon and an exciting writing!!!

Loved it!!

Felt like the lead-up to "the rest of the story."

Paul in Oklahoma

I love the spontaneity of this story & the risk of exposure in the outside yard - Proved we should nearly always never say “no” - almost felt as though I was watching - but unseen