by terryb1
Hot, or maybe since this is chapter #2 that should be better said, even hotter! This mirrored my first experience going to a park known for cruising when I was 16. It's as though you reached inside my brain and pulled the memory out. And I did meet with that older man at that park again, many times, after our first experience. Your spot-on description took me back there, and you wrote about it beautifully.