by TheseLegs
What is the point? Is she really a loving wife or one taken advantage of because the husband doesn't know what to do.
Vait needs the opportunity to bash Evan's little head with a brick. There should be some retribution for what Evan did to Mauz. It wouldn't hurt if Evan lost his right nut also...well,...it might hurt for a while! Evans callous arrogant character lost a star, the ease of Mauz's infidelity lost another Vait's lack of righteous indignation and anger lost one as well. The last fell to Evan getting away with it. -- 1☆
Not a bad story per se, but i think you switch a character name ("the Waren"/Evan?) a little bit in and it was confusing. Good sex, though.
Honestly, this seems like a world without porn. Maybe having a dick with a dick to teach a clueless couple how to actually enjoy the old in and out isn't too far fetched. He is a giant dick, but guaranteed, they will be making as rabbits do and enjoying themselves far more. Learning can be hard work.
I liked the fact that the reader had to pay attention to the dialogue. The story is a mixture of cheating, reconcile and a learning experience. Seems though the husband could have learned her desired stimulation by reading a book etc. and then communicating with her. Also she cheated and didn't tell her husband there's a problem Finally i would have beat the crap out of the braggart and ruined his nuts.