All Comments on 'Pawfection'

This is a cute story, very enjoyable and proof that not everything needs to have a sex scene.

I'm curious about the clock, it would be intereating to see a story from it's point of view.

For you next story, leave out the author notes/snippets, I found those a bit distracting from the story.

Great story! You prove not wverything need to have explicit details to be enjoyable. It seems like you have an interesting world to explore here. I hope you keep writing.

The only bit of criticism I have is don't include the little 'author notes' in the middle, I found it very distracting from your narrative.