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by Smuttyandfun

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy7 months ago

it sounds like he got what he deserved!

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u7 months ago

That's what happens when you only think with your dick

FandeborisFandeboris7 months ago

The AH got what he deserved. To top it off, he did not learn his lesson!.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfire7 months ago

That was a funny but spooky one, S&F! The main character was totally unlikeable to start and successfully stayed in character throughout the story, even after he got what he deserved. Good luck in the contest!

oldsage_1oldsage_17 months ago

Tough crowd tonight not a word of sympathy for the poor guy anywhere! 😢

Trick or Treat!

Cheers

SAGE

PickFictionPickFiction7 months ago

Short, but certainly not sweet. As the others and also the story said, payback is a bitch. Good job and good luck.

aslan72aslan727 months ago

Good horror story! Couldn’t have happened to a nicer bloke. Hated the character the whole time.

Hardrider56Hardrider567 months ago

Great story and the dict got what he needed.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Talk about a “short” story!

lsnid003lsnid0037 months ago

This was hilarious! Well done!

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