by Nightly8
Most definitely, either learn to spell or get a good editor (or both).
That said, you have the basics for a most uncommon story line, one with much potential. Your biggest albatross is going to be the age of your characters (physical attributes, stamina, etc, etc). But the set-up is wonderful. This could go somewhere.
You can do this, quite likely in a most entertaining way. Just work on that mechanics of writing issue.
Best of luck!
-- KVK
"We don't have much, for retirement ether. And you know that I'm do to retire
I'm do to retire. It's due..This ruined it for me.
You have a well laid out first chapter. Now you need to decide if you want to run with it.