All Comments on 'Peeping On The Thomas’'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

My Goodness, this is terrible writing and editing! Filled with typos and 1st person mistakes. This has to be AI, it is so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

that was ONE lucky MAN

GcoachGGcoachG29 days ago

Switching from first person to narrative over and over. Not well written at all. Love the concept, but not well written at all.

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