All Comments on 'Penal Slavery Pt. 04'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
You're Welcome And It Was My Pleasure

"Many thanks to ZZchromosome for his insightful comments and edits that helped make this a better story." My first editor's credit on Lit! :-)

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Woohoo!

My first editing credit on Lit! Thx for the opportunity to read your story and make suggestions, it was fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great story, keep it up!

Siska100Siska100about 5 years ago

Hope to read you again soon.

I can't wait to learn about Red, Nympho and Poseidon's future at the Lodge and eventually once they've served their time maybe?

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Wonder where Red and Jack are going? Will it work?

CastAdriftCastAdrift11 months ago

Love-ly chapter!

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