All Comments on 'Per Her Request'

It could do with some close and severe editing. Punctuation was a shambles, words were misplaced, some words were in an incorrect form.

Get someone to proof read for you! For example "... she dropped her folk ...." I suppose should have been "fork".

My god man, get an editor. the number of misspelled or missing words was atrocious. And the story line was ridiculous.

Yep, it was pretty bad, start to (skipped over) finish.

***TAnks fer hte raed.😁 Proof it or get a better editor. Thanks for the read.

Mercifully short, having said that I never got past the third paragraph. Poor.

The others have said it all - a limp story and you definitely need an Editor...

You need an editor. The story could be punched up a little. Whey was his friends anxious to let him do the wife. Not a story just a sex scene

The basics of a good story but the lack of grammar checking makes it difficult to read. Strongly suggest you get someone to edit your work before submitting anything else.