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limbicsystemlimbicsystemover 13 years ago
Great first story

Very suspenseful ... each paragraph had a new twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not real clear what happened at the end.

So what happened at the end? Do we have to make our own ending?

zed0zed0over 13 years ago
Huh?

WTF was that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Obviously

He shot himself and, he hopes, left his "lover" PG to remember him. I do not think he killed the cheating duo.

PoesproppiePoesproppieover 13 years ago
Nice one

Makes you think doesn't it!

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

A flash story? Not worth reading!

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