All Comments on 'Performance Art Audition'

why 'her' and 'herself' when it should be 'my' and 'myself'? very distressing, get an editor

...couldn't get past three paragraphs

Agree good start but confusing with Her

Part 2 ?? Direction of story

thanks for the feedback, I noticed those too and submitted a revised version. I hate to bother an editor with my stories, I'm sure they have better things to do

thanks anon! Part 2 if there is enough interest!

great story, very intreging, would love to read part two

Not sure if you’re still writing, but I absolutely love this story and would love to read a part 2 if there ever was one!