All Comments on 'Personal Anatomy Punishment Ch. 02'

In chapter 1, the punishment was set for "after 8th period", i.e., after school was out for the day. Now you have a health class going on after the first part of the punishment session. Also, any girl like her with almost a week's notice would have told her mother who would have stormed into the Principal's office. He would have noticed her sub nature and meted out a separate punishment for her, or added her to her daughter's punishment. With no sex happening, you really need to develop your story line better.

This is coming along nicely and pushing her boundaries is exactly the way to go, preferably getting darker. Humiliation and forced exhibitionism is very arousing.

You write it well.

I loved both chapters. I like that Evelyn is [verbally] forced to do all the things like undressing and walking to the office. Looking forward to the next chapter!