All Comments on 'Perspectives Pt. 1a - Rachel'

Great. You can make it better by slowing down on the part where she is showing mr Morgan her tits. Go slower with more detail on her looking at his bulge in his pants. Hottest sex point is at the transition from clothed to partially clothed. And at the end some mention of future possibilities. Have her wonder if she might be able to be Mrs Morgan and get fucked.

Excellent writing, I loved the attention to detail and her internal monologue. Please write part two!!