All Comments on 'Petite and the Beast Pt. 01'

Pretty good for a first submission.

My only criticism being too many names, some need to be he, his, her, she etc.

Well worth a 5*

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This is barely literate. Wrong punctuation, poor grammar, and bad sentence construction. I assume you are an adult, yet don't know what a comma is for. I strongly suggest you use a program like the Hemmingway editor.

https://hemingwayapp.com/