All Comments on 'Phil & Connor Pt. 01 - Baseball star'

by DoughallDeeson

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer28 days ago

Nice beginning, it felt very natural and realistic. It also had that feeling of sweetness that comes with newly formed relationships. Looking forward to finding out where this goes from here.

DoughallDeesonDoughallDeeson28 days agoAuthor

@marcLuciFer, I'll be uploading additional parts this week,

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Writer of erotic and non-erotic tales. Married to my wonderful hubs. Spending my time cooking, baking and writing - oh and working out.