by Peronath
A month has passed since the last comment, where are all the others? A fabulous story, with a great plot with almost perfect time. Very good internal and external dialogue. The emotional and physical connection between them was arousing. Two build ups over long and slow adding to the tension, and finally leading to numerous fucking positions before an unexpected body covering-ejaculation. I can't wait to see the finished photos and whether they become a couple. Excellent!
This is an outstanding story, and it certainly needs a sequel. The love scenes really add depth to the story, and the characters are well defined. Five stars.