All Comments on 'Photography Bonding - Sequel'

I will have Blue Balls waiting for future sequels, but patiently awaiting your writing!

Excellent continuation of the story! There were a few typos/grammar inconsistencies, but nothing too distracting. You do a really good job of balancing dialogue, describing the action, and keeping everyone involved. That can get tricky in threesome scenes.

Lmk if you want an editor/proofreader for the next chapter. PMs open here or Sensei Kevin on FetLife.

Excellent continuation of the story! There were a few typos/grammar inconsistencies, but nothing too distracting. You do a really good job of balancing dialogue, describing the action, and keeping everyone involved. That can get tricky in threesome scenes.

Lmk if you want an editor/proofreader for the next chapter. PMs open here or Sensei Kevin on FetLife.

Excellent continuation of the story! There were a few typos/grammar inconsistencies, but nothing too distracting. You do a really good job of balancing dialogue, describing the action, and keeping everyone involved. That can get tricky in threesome scenes. Lmk if you want an editor/proofreader for the next chapter. PMs open here or Sensei Kevin on FetLife.