All Comments on 'Picture Story: Easter Hunt'

I want to say a separate THANK YOU to NickLucas for taking a look at the text and finding some factual errors.

And to a British friend, whose love of slow stripping was an inspiration for this story.

A good story. Love the pics and positioning of them most appropriate.

Thank you, Tod!

And THANK YOU for editing.

Very sexy and creative idea during the Coronavirus. It’s a 5/5 in my vote. Deserves a contest win!

enjoyed your story and pics... very well written and the pics brought back many memories of loyola... well done

Love it!!!

Well done, Annie! Loved it.

Also fun that it was set quite close to home.

~AngelicaS1780

(this side of Lit is not letting me log in)

Now that is an Easter Hunt with wonderful sensual gifts along the way to pure satisfaction!

Outstanding story Annie, Excellent writing and I loved that you added the visual effects to your story.

Thanks

The concept and treasure hunt were brilliant. The build up for the climax was inspired and beautifully erotic. A perfect idea for these times.

I usually expect more flesh in the illustrations, but you did splendid!

Wow! This is truely hot and my only wish is that there was a photo of your nipples and the front of your pussy covered by the beautiful, red silk. With, of course, your fingers inside your panties.

Good grief, my friend. I saw everything, smelt everything, even going as far as feeling everything. It's called imagination, and I am 92 years of age.

Well, now, this was an exceptionally fun and engaging read. I remember my frustration during that extended cold April in the area which made your story particularly relatable. The story telling was exceptional, and I'm a fan.

Shapely white legs in black stockings…..delicious! Thank you.

Treasure hunt

Beautifully written

A clear improvement over your past writings

Well done