by aaronbrown
For some people if it doesn't come your way ... you just have to go get it yourself !
That wasn’t good. Needed proof reading for starters and her attitude was terrible. Crying when someone bigger than her with more experience isn’t even punching her and then practically bashing someone and thinking she’s superior just because she’s a novice with more strength due to her stature, to then standing on him until he agrees to go on a date? None of that was romantic.
I think it’s a fine line between sexy dominance situation and straight up predatory asshole shit, and that line gets thinner when you bring martial arts into it. As someone that trains, this felt like it was written from the perspective of someone that never had and it showed.
How was this in the Romance section?! How did she get that good in only a few weeks? This was a horrible story. Taylor wasn’t a consistent character as her behavior was all over the place. No character development for anyone either.