All Comments on 'Pizza Guy Dare'

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Mark_MichiganMark_Michigan11 months ago

Time to order a pizza!!!!

zooliciouszoolicious11 months ago

NIce idea. Just poorly executed. Read around the stories here for ideas about narration and pacing.

LustyScribeLustyScribe11 months ago

Great, sexy story, but needs some cleaning up, especially at the end. It's jumbled; who's where, etc. But again: Sexy.

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