All Comments on 'Playdate'

by AllisonVargas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was more clinical than erotic. It read like a book report, which makes sense as she was basically transcribing a movie rather than recalling her actual feelings from the encounter. I highly doubt it was what a counselor would have wanted from that assignment.

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

A “What My Husband and I Did Last Night” report. No cheating, but no life or passion either.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

if a robot was tasked to come up with an erotic short story, and you find out it's only running the pre-Alpha version of the software, before the AI got fixed, and the robot fails miserably.

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