All Comments on 'Playing the Long Game'

Couldn't read past the mention of "Hyperman" loosing his powers due to a magic gemstone. Clearly based on DC Comics characters of Superman and Supergirl.

Good concept and fun story, but paced way too fast. You're likely to catch a lot of flack for a seemingly independent woman, especially one with enough willpower to be a superhero, submitting that quickly. It likely would have been better to stretch out the hopelessness, with her hoping that her cousin would come save her, before eventually breaking, or otherwise giving in. If you want shorter stories, consider the strategic use of ellipses, or otherwise just use longer word counts to convey a more immersive narrative.

I hope you take my suggestions to heart, and hope to see what you write in the future.

Write more pls

Please us see grammArly next time i was thrown out of the story everytime ypu used the word waste (which means garbage) when you meant to say waist.