All Comments on 'Playing with my Songbird Ch. 04'

Doesn't fit with the rest of the story

Can I just say, I absolutely LOVE your writing. I don't know what you're doing, but I hope you keep doing it.

I didn't know you would be taking my request, but thanks anyway. I was nice to see that everything wasn't all hunky dory and we get to see how they started catching feelings for each other. Hopefully, this isn't the end of the flashback so we get some answers on Alec sexuality as well as more descriptions on their bodies. Either way, you do want you want to do as I will continue reading this wonderful story.

Good, credible background, and sweet. The characters almost seem like real people. ; )

She was a butch but not a lesbian. She should be a tomboy with a full figured physique. The author could give us the filler between this story and more of how he likes to give her marital satisfaction in a submissive way. She could describe how they went from discovering his desire to be tease/tortured and how she demanded him be her sex toy while she took on the role of breadwinner.