All Comments on 'Playing With Sally-Mae'

Far from Ashson's best - I gave it the lowest rating I've ever applied to one of his stories

This is one of your better stories and that is quite a statement, as there are over a thousand of them! It's a most enjoyable read. Getting it on with a girl you grew up with, and often fight with, must be a really good feeling both for you and for Sally-Mae. 5* ~~JB

You write as if Sally Mae is simple minded ie not knowing about the sun moving and not grasping such simple rudiments and never being able to practice how you had instructed her how to fish one might start to think that you were taking advantage of a simple minded girl but I think you sufficiently dispelled that fact by having her state that there were other boys who tried to take advantage and never got anywhere mainly because she had the state of mind to run away before they could take advantage of her sexually and the fact she could put pay to sexual advances she did not wish to respond too ; so taking all this into account I think this was a very adorable little story about a simple country girl’s first time , well done 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Stars a very adorable innocent story of a country girl and her sexual desires. Well done on such a very nice little story , it made me so horny , which at first I felt bad about doing so, but on reflection I think it was okay to get horny about such a story and I feel anyone else should not feel bad about getting horny over such a wonderful quaint story , as the fact that your story of innocent action was fully legal and not illicit , well done on walking such a fine line .Please keep such stories coming and cumming Many many Thanks for making me so Horny and yet not depraved

Dear Witton please could you read this story again after reading my comments and then try looking at this story from a different angle , as I think and feel this story is so simple in it’s telling that it is Brilliant and I’d love to know if you then change your views on its value in the rating of this story against the Author’s other work Ie if you then feel it is just as worthy as his other works / writing if you still have the same views I will stand by your right to rate this story so lowly against the Authors other works and Thamk you very much for rereading and reconsidering your views about this story and we will just have to agree to disagree as everyone is in titled to their own views ( DJ’s will tell you that they are sometimes not shore if a record is so bad it’s brilliant and can only wait and see what the general pubic think of it and sometimes it turns out to be a great hit , but mostly not )

A Good simple story in more ways than one A Fantastic 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Story I’d like to hear more stories about these two especially Sally Mae