All Comments on 'Please! I'll Suck Your Cock! Ch. 01'

I love the way this story is developing.

Such a delicious arrangement between the two consenting participants, so mutually fulfilling a contract for them both. If only all financial obligations could be settled in this amicable way...

A really nice beginning, but there's probably no "or" about it in that last sentence. In David's shoes, I would be both excited and scared. Looking forward to finding out which of those feelings tips the scales and to where this new arrangement goes from here.

This seems like either a repost, or a copy. I know I've read this story before.

Whoa. Hot and nasty. A dirty mind is a terrible thing to waste. Clearly this author knows his way around a cock or three. Keep up the inspired/inspiring work. WG

Loved it! I love the way you got David from being curious about sucking cock and then sooner than later he's on his knees sucking Mr. Carver. You gave good detail on how to first undress him, sniff his package and then remove the underwear. At the end David was told what to say, which is something I've always said after sucking a guy's cock, "Thank you for allowing me to suck your cock and swallow your precious cum". I'll definitely be reading all your stories.

Well written, well paced. David was a bit too chatty.

5 stars.

Hell yeah ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I liked the building manger required David to get naked and help him undress as his way to make surrender to blowing him.

Superb writing, detailed, and the story flowed naturally from the beginning to the end. Terrific descriptions of David's secret desire to suck dick, and his subsequent training by Mr. Carver was sensational to read. I got so hard reading your word images, I had to get my cock out, and suck Mr. Carvers dick along with David.

Any man who has sucked cock should favorite this story. White men sucking black cock it taboo but very popular in real life. The contrast in skin colors is mesmerizing. All hard dicks taste wonderful to a cock whore, but a large black snake like cock is in another class. It's very sexy to suck a black cock and eat the man's cum.

I know from personal experience.

Can't wait to see where the author takes his readers. Would love a PM from the author. I write gay stories also and it has always been a huge turn on for me to that. Great work!