All Comments on 'Pleasure Dome'

by oggbashan

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fifty5fifty5over 19 years ago
They say...

... that timing is the essence of good comedy. This story got the timing spot on.

I spent the first couple of screens wondering about the story classification - was I missing the joke?

But then I got sucked into the story. When the penultimate session went awry, I was distraught for the guy!

Then the climax: socked in the chops with a wet transistor!

Masterly!

Eff

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 18 years ago
Ouch!

Poor guy. Needs to go out to the pub and buy a flesh and blood girl a drink...? Loved the ending! (At least it wasn't another guy?) :)

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...