by BethanyBDSM
This was extremely well written and very exciting. You absolutely should continue this story. Though if she becomes a slave she should not be allowed to cum without permission
Nice please include the mother daughter as both sex slave to Tabitha in one of the sequels.
You know this giving you five stars is getting a little much, I don't think you can write anything that doesn't require that. great job as usual Can't wait to see what all you have in mind here.
A very good story arch, loved the pace of it as well. I can't wait to see what happens to little Em. xx
BethanyBDSM is good!! This is a very HOT storyline. Emma's need and curiosity are amazingly hot!! And Tabitha seems to have the perfect dirty mind to make the most of Emma's desire. Just excellent and I vote for you to move ahead with chapters 2 & 3. A 5- star start for this one.
OUTSTANDING and a 5 star start to what could be a fantastic series of these fun loving consenting ladies to rock the world with their nasty behavior. Yes more chapters would be a win for everyone. Push the limits of the new slave and leave nothing out as you make her a sweet willing and begging submissive. Cheers
Based on the scores and comments we can look forward to many more fun chapter for these kids and there sexual adventures. Cheers