All Comments on 'Plum Blossoms - Full Bloom Pt. 05'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Poorly written

This is written at an eighth grade level. The dialogue was from a horny teenager. The characters are thoroughly unlikable people. If they got run over by a truck I wouldn't care. Please stop posting this drivel and figure out something new. This isn't working on any level.

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Long time tech guy, sometime writer back in the Usenet newsgroup days getting back into the game. Very attached. Fond of good food and drink, outdoor activities, and sarcasm. 11/10/19 "Plum Blossoms: Full Bloom Pt. 01" went live today. It's the first part of the novel ...

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