All Comments on 'Poolside Perversions Ch. 01'

. . . .you've really set the stage for a wonderful story. Your descriptions of the setting and sensations are very good. I would suggest you begin to introduce some dialogue and interaction between the protagonists in the next chapter, or it may begin to drag a bit. But look forward to seeing where you go with this.

Very nice, I expect more from this story soon. Keep up the good work.

Good story, can't wait for it to continue.

Booooo - ring. Boring. Boringer. Boringest.

you have used more into the masterbation but u didnt..it took for ever for u to really get into it..i hope see a better one later....