All Comments on 'Poolside Play'

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perseygoddessperseygoddessalmost 16 years agoAuthor
good but prefer the other...

I think the first more descriptive. nice writing though

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Another great fantasy! Wonderful!

Super great fantasy! Well written, I felt like I was there--Great job!

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Another great fantasy! Wonderful!

Super great fantasy! Well written, I felt like I was there--Great job!

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